1st tutorial – Presentation of drafts
I presented my drafts to the class, received some constructive feedbacks and comments. Here are the drafts that I have done.
I presented my drafts to the class, received some constructive feedbacks and comments. Here are the drafts that I have done.
Comments by the class:
Should include more varieties of vegetables. Not just mushrooms, carrots and chillies.
Comments by the class:
Top: Should include some other basketball related objects to form the name. Using the ball alone is not enough.
Bottom: The cigarette idea is good, but it does not reflect clearly that I dislike smokers.
Comments by the class:
Top: A better version than the previous one, more basketball related objects were used in this draft. This was shortlisted to be used for final submission.
Bottom: Will be good if I combine the skull with the previous draft. Should add in the picture a man smoking and puffing. Will send the message across that I hate smokers.
Comments by the class:
Top: Good idea to use basketballer stickmen to form letters. Shortlisted for final submission.
Bottom: Does not fulfill the assignment requirement at all.
Conclusion: Will work on the 2 drafts that were shortlisted and improve them!
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